Assignment Feedback Examples

Below are several examples of feedback that was given to students. Each of them offers something different, but notice how many of them compliment and encourage students while also pointing them in the right direction.

Example 1: Nanette Hexam

Remember that there should be two inequalities to solve. What is the other one?

Example 2: Whitney Hyans

You started by stating the medium being the iPad. Like the qualities of each medium, you can elaborate about the aspects of the technology and the apps, the versatility, what it looks like, how it is different from analog media, and how it pushes the boundaries.

Example 3: Jennifer Klenk

Alex, Your website is sharp and easy to navigate (Great job!). The website looks professional. Consider sharing a more personal story about how the business was started and what the company values.

Example 4: Cassandra Clark

Cuban Missile Crisis is an important event in United States history, as you noted. However, your topic as it is stated is broad and will be hard to research until it is narrowed. What exactly do you want to learn about your topic? Do you want to know how Americans reacted to the crisis? Do you want to understand how leaders, including John F. Kennedy and Fidel Castro, corresponded? Do you want to study how newspapers reported the incident? Your topic is off to a great start but does need narrowing and a more specific direction. If you have questions about this, please make sure to review the following instructional announcements and videos and then submit remaining inquiries to me.

Example 5: Jennifer Fortin

Since P(0) is 0 in this situation, you could also have used the recursive formula and stipulated that n>1. You got around it in a creative way though!

Example 6: (Anonymous)

Thank you for showing your work. Your answers are correct except for the rounding. If you are going to round to the hundredths place then h should be greater than or equal to 58.23 or h less than or equal to 41.78.